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Rachel, witch, priestess, and the ambitious leader of a growing coven, travels to Italy with her friends – seemingly for shopping and fun – but she has a darker mission. She faces the ambition of rival witches, the appetites of an old goddess of the earth, the misery of desperate criminals, and finally, an ancient order of magicians who command beings from the outer spheres. Raw power won't be enough, and she will need the love and trust of her friends, both old and new.
Size: 133 KB (24,941 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: ft/ft, Fa/ft, Mult, Consensual, Romantic, Magic, Lesbian, Fiction, Paranormal, Group Sex, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Petting, Slow, Caution, Violent

Review by The Black Knight   [other reviews by The Black Knight]

Reviewed:


In this, the second of the 'Wellspring' stories, is a delightful little lesbian romance mixed with slightly over the top magical action. It's definitely not an everyday mix, and while it doesn't work perfectly, well, nothing really works perfectly in life.

Technically, the story was superior to the vast majority of stories out there at the moment, but not flawless. The real strength of this story was in the characters, who unfortunately - other than the narrator - aren't really revealed that much. Still, perhaps they can be developed more in future stories, which a hopefully forthcoming in the series.

While those looking for pure stroke would be disappointed, I'd recommend this story to just about anyone other than that group. Give it a chance, and you should like it.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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