The Silent Supper by Wesley Doyle

Author's Description:
Arkansas hills, 1887. Hettie Vail lays out the dead, and for two years she has kept quiet about the thumbprint on a drowned wife's throat. Mocked by the killer on Halloween, she sets a silent supper. The gravedigger walks in barefoot, asleep. The dead wife takes the third chair. By All Saints' morning, Hettie will speak.
Size: 33 KB (6,799 words)
Genre: Horror
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Paranormal, Ghost

Review by tabletMyth   [other reviews by tabletMyth]

Reviewed:


I came upon this short story following a recommendation from a name I trust. I was not disappointed.

The author manages to set the scene and describe the environs with a minimalist, even bare, prose that nevertheless just plain works.

The main character, Hettie, gets the bulk of the story, and narrative, with only two other characters developed - Jonah and Kettering, but many others are sketched in, briefly, yet still sufficiently complete to fill all the required space. There could be a fourth principle character, but she's not referenced in life, although her death is the string that tugs the story forward to conclusion.

I don't believe I have ever read such a complete story in so few words, that still left me satisfied. And even surprised it had ended. More surprising for was that this is in a genre I would normally avoid, and I nearly quit are the summary.... I now have a new follow in place.

Well deserved recommendation, and you won't be shocked that I am going to validate it. Go on! I hope you too will enjoy the seemingly effortless art in what may be some of the the sparsest, but surely hardest working, prose I have read in ages.

Myth

P.S. Nope, not going to do my usual spoiler alert and scene steal, this really has to be appreciated cold!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7
 

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