Author's Description:
Sitting in front of Target I had a little fantasy about the first few women I saw go into the store. Walter lives out my fantasy.
Size: 183 KB (37,123 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Harem, Interracial, Black Female, White Male, Oriental Female, Hispanic Female, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Petting, Cream Pie
Sitting in front of Target I had a little fantasy about the first few women I saw go into the store. Walter lives out my fantasy.
Size: 183 KB (37,123 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Harem, Interracial, Black Female, White Male, Oriental Female, Hispanic Female, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Petting, Cream Pie
Review by Vitruvian Manuel [other reviews by Vitruvian Manuel]
Reviewed:
This is a sweet and interesting story of an older gentleman and a bevy of what he considers beauties. While they aren't supermodels with huge tits, they're real women, which is way better.
The Bad:
Too short. Conflict comes out of practically nowhere. Not enough examination of the women's "brokenness".
The good:
The women look like real women. They all have individual personalities and descriptions, though they have some similarities. Protagonist is likable and relatable. Sex is interesting and arousing.
Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
