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Author's Description:
I begin exchanging emails with a fan of my stories. It turns out that we share a lot of the same fantasies. It also turns out that I live in the town where she grew up. And she doesn’t live far away. This is a story of consensual sex. But it is rough at the request of the woman who asked me to write it. Please pass this one by if you aren’t up for that kind of thing.
Size: 292 KB (57,886 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Fa/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Cheating, Slut Wife, Incest, Sister, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, FemaleDom, Spanking, Rough, Humiliation, Gang Bang, Group Sex, Interracial, Black Male, White Female, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Sex Toys, Bestiality, Water Sports, Spitting, Exhibitionism

Review by Devil95   [other reviews by Devil95]

Reviewed:


Wow! I have found a story that is hard to evaluate.

I usually have to point out simple errors that seem to be often overlooked. Not only could I not find any, I was pleasantly surprised at how well this was written.

Vulgus has a command of the English language. Read the first few paragraphs and you will conclude, as I did, that Vulgus is a writer. Not just a storyteller, but a writer.

I never thought I would read a story that had very little dialogue and could still keep my attention. Details that needed more info got them. The ones that didn't need them, received just enough.

As the story points out, not everyone will like the subject material. If it's not your cup of tea, move on. I'm not a fan of everything in it as well. Before you do, I recommend to keep an open mind, and take an hour or so to read this. It will not be wasted.

I'm looking forward to reading more from Vulgus.

Bravo!

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