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Author's Description:
Look, it's not easy being god, If you think you've got problems you want to see mine.
Size: 19 KB (3,739 words)
Genre: Humor
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Consensual, Humor, Caution

Review by Ivan_Ronical   [other reviews by Ivan_Ronical]

Reviewed:


It's been a while, but I'm still here. Fortunately for me, Raven Soule was also here at some point, though his work in this case is a little difficult to review due to its oddball nature.

YTYGP is hardly a typical story. It's not really much of a "story" at all, actually, instead being more like a memoir. It chronicles, in stream-of-consciousness fashion, the daily life of a god (small 'g'). He discovers his godhood at a very young age, tries to abuse his power a little bit, and then gets nuked. Repeatedly. In fact, I would wager that there is probably more use of nukes in this story than in any other story on the site.

There's a number of grammatical issues here, even allowing for the extremely British nature of the character. Definitely not enough to make this unreadable, but enough that it's noticeable.

There's no sex in this story, moving on...

The main thing that YTYGP does is accomplish its goal, which is to provide a humorous outlook on the life of a child deity who is continually getting nuked. If this, or just the idea of children being nuked, appeals to you, then I highly recommend reading this story.

Plot: N/A | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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