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Author's Description:
Junkin gets divorced. Soon after this his business is taken over by the Fed, leaving him with much money. Traveling west he joins his mother and proceeds to help a bunch of misfits straighten their life out, finding happiness in the process.
Size: 348 KB (69,382 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Heterosexual, Slow

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed:


This is a gentle, romantic story, so if you're looking for sex you're wasting your time.

The tale is well written, and though I did find the dialogue a little stilted, or 'clunky' it didn't detract from the story itself. Possibly it's a colloquial way of speaking unique to Colorado, if it is then I apologise.

The characters are well drawn, with the gentle intelligence of the main protagonist shining through. All told it was a warming, emotional story that was well worth reading. Enjoy!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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