Eddie Spedman thought he was living the American Dream; owned his own business and married to his highschool sweetheart with two wonderful kids. Until a freak event made him realize that he was living the American Nightmare. However that freak event also gave him something he didn't believe in; Sex Slaves!
Size: 299 KB (59,424 words)
Genre: Mind Control
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Fa/Fa, Romantic, NonConsensual, Reluctant, Mind Control, Slavery, Lesbian, Heterosexual, Fiction, Cheating, Cuckold, Incest, MaleDom, Harem, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Doctor/Nurse, Big Breasts, Slow
Review by Mythic Shadow [other reviews by Mythic Shadow]
Reviewed:
Addicted has been on the site for a while already and I was surprised by the score it received from the readers, which in my opinion doesn't do the story justice. I gave the story an overall score of 'Very good'.
Addicted is a mind control story, but not your typical one. Instead of collecting as many women as the main character can, he limits himself and makes overall ethical right choices, which sets this story apart from many other mind control stories. To me this makes the story very appealing to read.
The plot has several twists that keep it interesting. There is character growth and real challenges for the main character to overcome. There is also a good balance between smut and plot, which kept me reading the story all the way to the end.
The story does have technical issues though. It's nothing major that an editor can't fix, but it was annoying at points. One of the downsides was the lack of dialogue quotes, this was especially apparent in flashback scenes and was at times confusing. The author also switched between third and first point of view (although third PoV seemed to be the default), used the wrong tenses from time to time, and there were other small grammar and spelling problems. However, the plot and appeal were both high enough to not let these problems bother me. I would have given this story an overall score of 'Great' if those problems weren't present.
If you're into incest and mind control stories, then you should give this one a read.
