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Author's Description:
A shy nearly reclusive librarian winds up as a very public figure as a crewmember of the first crewed mission to Mars. Not only does she have to deal with unwanted publicity, but theres also other surprises waiting for her. Codes will be updated when I get there in the story.
Size: 122 KB (22,131 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Reluctant, Science Fiction, Space

Review by peregrinf   [other reviews by peregrinf]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


As far as I'm concerned, this is NOT an incomplete story. Inactive, maybe, and I wouldn't mind having sam177 reactivate it, but it is ok as it is. The characters are appealing, the setting fascinating, the plot intriguing. While there are some technical glitches they are few and far between and don't spoil the story.

As it is, the description as posted isn't quite accurate -- it isn't the real trip to Mars, it is a test, and the test subject is well drawn and charming -- perfect for the job.

Sam177 could mark it concluded, though I really wouldn't object to the story continuing. I have heard from Sam177 since I posted this review, and I hold out hope for seeing more fine work from that source, whether it is this story continued or anything else. Hang in there, Sam177.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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