Meet Cletus Putnam: landlord, entrepreneur, opportunist, sometime Dom. It's hotter than Hell and he has the only swimming pool and central air conditioning in his little lower middle-class neighborhood -- and he's not above taking advantage of that fact.
Size: 688 KB (130,682 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Ma/Ma, Ma/mt, mt/mt, Consensual, NonConsensual, Coercion, Blackmail, Slavery, BiSexual, Heterosexual, DomSub, MaleDom, Spanking, Light Bond, Humiliation, Interracial, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Enema, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism, Slow
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )
In "The Heat Wave", we have the story of a man that has the only house in the area with a pool and air conditioning. With the temperatures and humidity high, various neighbors are interested in both. With a rule about after 7PM swimming being in the buff, the potential for fun is high. Read along to see how things shake out.
Sexually, the story was not too bad. If you failed to read the codes, mm, Mm, and MM are coded for, so be prepared. There is quite a bit of Male Dom activity mixed in with blackmail. There is some definite stroke material here.
The plot itself is pretty good, though simple. The main character likes to pontificate. I found myself really wanting to skip those parts, but I had to read them if I wanted to review the story. Most of those could have been left out and not harmed the story at all. Most of the characters were believable.
Technically, there were a few typo type errors, and a missing letter here or there, but it was fairly clean as a whole.
The author did a very good job of being a Dominant male handling a few submissive females. He showed a few different versions of the female sub, and the main character handled the various personalities well.
Overall, the story was pretty darn good. If you enjoy D/s stories with a MDom flavor, and don't mind the MM/Mm/mm interaction, this story should hit the spot for you.
(Note, this review was edited after my one major issue with the story was corrected by the author. The review now reflects the current state of the story. Kudos to the author for taking the time to make the change.)
