Author's Description:
Jake and his family attempt to get the attention of the Confederacy by putting together a prepack. Come along for the ride as Jake learns a little about life, and about himself. The story is complete and I will be posting chapters over the next week or two as they complete the editing process. Story codes apply to the complete story and will not be found in all chapters.
Size: 577 KB (109,303 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Consensual, BiSexual, Science Fiction, Incest, Brother, Sister, DomSub, Spanking, Light Bond, Group Sex, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Cream Pie, Exhibitionism, Needles, Military
Jake and his family attempt to get the attention of the Confederacy by putting together a prepack. Come along for the ride as Jake learns a little about life, and about himself. The story is complete and I will be posting chapters over the next week or two as they complete the editing process. Story codes apply to the complete story and will not be found in all chapters.
Size: 577 KB (109,303 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Consensual, BiSexual, Science Fiction, Incest, Brother, Sister, DomSub, Spanking, Light Bond, Group Sex, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Cream Pie, Exhibitionism, Needles, Military
Review by Vitruvian Manuel [other reviews by Vitruvian Manuel]
Reviewed:
Want to get picked up? Already picked your concubines? Don't want to wait for a rndom pickup?
The Bad:
Some obvious typos. Enough characters to forget who's who.
The Good:
Well plotted. Interesting. Plausible idea. Likable charachters, except for the bad guys.
The last word:
If you like Swarm Cycle stories, and don't mind a 500+K story, this one, if not the one to read.
--Manny
Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
