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Author's Description:
Imagine you're broke and you have a family to feed. Imagine you are then offered 5 grand to do half a days work. The problem is, you're told it's very illegal, but not what the job is and you're told it'll be fun, that you'll probably enjoy it. What do you do? Do you do it? Dare you trust him? This is the story of a father with this very predicament.
Size: 104 KB (20,891 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/ft, Mult, Reluctant, Incest, Mother, Son, Brother, Sister, Father, Daughter

Review by richardshagrin   [other reviews by richardshagrin]

Reviewed:


North, South, East or West, home is where incest is best.

I liked this incest story. Don't like some of them, but the characters were well rounded (not just the ladies figures) and there was character development as well, all you could ask for a story slightly shorter than 100k which is what I usually look for before I review a story. Within limits, longer is better. But this one ends at an appropriate place and although a sequel would be welcome and fit into the situation, it didn't end at a cliff-hanger.

I suspect I shouldn't try to tell about the action, except that it was reasonably hot without being a pure "stroke" story. All the main family characters have a lot of sex in different positions and twosomes, threesomes and some foursomes. There is no Mm action, and no anal. Oh, yeah, the focus of the story is making some porno videos for the Russian market by a British family as stars. For good and sufficient reason, they need the money. There is some force involved, waving of guns and some mild brutality once they accepted part of the money in advance without knowing exactly what would be required. I probably shouldn't say any more, I may have gone too far, already.

It's a good plot, not a great plot, once the reason for paying the money is revealed which wasn't hard to guess well before the family did, it moves straight forwardly onward. I will give it a seven, which is good. Six is average, eight is very good. The technical quality was fine, I am not all that picky but I didn't see any problems. Of course the number of orgasms in a four hour period exceed belief, but that is what suspension of disbelief is for. Call it a ten.

Appeal to Reviewer, I think its a seven. That's pretty close to what the voting readership gives it. For this length story a "good" rating is reasonably high. This author has other stories on SOL, I will be looking at them for future reading.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7
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