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Author's Description:
Todd Dumont and his friends found success at a young age but then it faded. In the ensuing years each manages to recapture his or her dreams. But what happens when those dreams intersect?
Size: 141 KB (27,458 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed:


Jay Cantrell has done it again.
My first exposure to his writing was "The Outsider".

Now he has carried the loner to another level. He does bring him around eventually but that is the story and I'm not spoiling it any more.

The story does have ups and downs. It has minor climaxes and a couple of times where the "little guy" sticks it to the big guy(corporate) and it's down with style.

Love lost/found/lost/found..What ever you want to call it, this is a good story and a fairly quick read.

FD3. (see my profile)

Keep writing, I'll keep reading. Don't miss this one, You'll kick yourself.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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