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Author's Description:
A girl discovers that she can feel everything her twin brother feels.
Size: 69 KB (13,065 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, ft/ft, Consensual, Science Fiction, Incest, Brother, Sister, Oral Sex, Masturbation

Review by tendertouch   [other reviews by tendertouch]

Reviewed:


Tina Coleman is Debbie Reed's best friend, and has been for years. She is also Debbie's twin brother's best friend, but he has more in mind for her. Debbie understands that and is happy for the two of them. Simple, right? Maybe not. It seems that there's a connection between Paul and Debbie that may complicate things - a lot.

The sex in the story is well done. Much of it is tentative but that is only right for young people as they learn. The sex itself, though, isn't the hottest part of the story for me. The sexual tension between Tina and Debbie is very well handled.

The plot of the story centers around an interesting premise: there is an empathetic connection between Debbie and Paul that they don't really understand, and it's both physical and emotional. This gives a great lead in to the portion of the story that I like the most - Debbie's confusion over her relationship with her best friend and how she sorts it out.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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