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Author's Description:
A Swarm Cycle Story: A young boy turns 14 before hitting puberty. In spite of this lack of maturity, the rules state he must present himself for CAP testing.
Size: 38 KB (7,353 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Consensual, Science Fiction, Polygamy/Polyamory, First

Review by Mythic Shadow   [other reviews by Mythic Shadow]

Reviewed:


Harkness Rules is set in the Swarm Cycle universe. For those who are not familiar with this, it's an interesting universe that revolves about Earth becoming under attack in a distant future. I recommend looking it up to learn more about it.

Harkness Rules takes a slightly diffferent take on the typical pick up stories and I quite enjoyed reading this version. I've read several dozen SC stories in the past decade.

The main character makes some interesting choices in this one and although it doesn't feature any sex, it makes for a good read if you're familiar with this universe. If you're not very familiar with the universe, then I would recommend starting on another story, although this one does address some of the basic points about the CAP scores.

On the technical side there are some mistakes, but nothing too bad. Plot-wise, I'd have loved to read more about what happened after the pick up, but the story so far stands well on itself.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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