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Author's Description:
New technology is great '" but a girlfriend who wanders finds that you can lie, but you can't hide!
Size: 59 KB (11,427 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Heterosexual, Cheating
New technology is great '" but a girlfriend who wanders finds that you can lie, but you can't hide!
Size: 59 KB (11,427 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Heterosexual, Cheating
Review by funkso [other reviews by funkso]
Reviewed:
3G PDA is a quick and interesting story. Jim has been dating Brit for a while, and she's the first girl he really feels intimate with - a really close bond. He gives her a 3G phone with GPS capabilities for her birthday, and then quickly things seem to fall apart in his world.
It's a cheating partners story, that seems pretty straightforward and has a really good, enjoyable flow to it. What really makes this story nice though is the second chapter which gives some more resolution to the tale and sets it apart from a lot of the stories in the genre.
A really great read.
Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 6 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
