A young sorcerer battles invading entities to save a small village
Size: 24 KB (4,406 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Magic, Fiction, Horror
Review by Mythic Shadow [other reviews by Mythic Shadow]
Reviewed:
Eldred has to battle dangerous entities in this short, yet epic fantasy story.
I absolutely loved reading the story and I could have easily read an entire novel about the fantasy world that Porlock created.
It doesn't feature sex, but I think it's better off without since it allows you to focus on the plot. I would have loved it to see more details about the entities that sent the dangers to Eldred's village, but there is something to say about keeping them up to the imagination of the reader as well.
On the technical side I have very few issues. Some sentences could have been structured in a slightly clearer way, but overall this could have easily been published as an e-book if it had more words.
If you love fantasy stories then I can definitely recommend this one. As for me, I'm going to check if Porlock wrote similar stories to this one.
