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All I had was a fever, but she wanted to be my nurse anyway.
Size: 15 KB (2,966 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, First
All I had was a fever, but she wanted to be my nurse anyway.
Size: 15 KB (2,966 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, First
Review by The Black Knight [other reviews by The Black Knight]
Reviewed:
A just-this-guy story is always a safe bet for a reader looking for a simple stroke piece that actually has some semblance of a plot, with a dose of humor twisted into it. This story is another example of a modified retelling of a cliche porn movie 'plot', mixed with a few new elements to create something light and entertaining.
On the down side, it wasn't technically written quite as well as it could have been. Still, for those looking for this type of story, there isn't likely to be much better. I wouldn't recommend it to anyone looking for a plot-driven, or epic tale... but anyone with the time to spare, and looking for an enjoyable read to kill that time, I think should give this story a try.
Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
