Down From the Mountain by Gina Marie Wylie

Author's Description:
I don't write many short stories, this is one of my first attempts. It is said that you can get used to anything. This man has an affliction few of us would be comfortable with -- but he makes do just fine.
Size: 42 KB (8,187 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Fiction

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed:


Like just about EVERYTHING Gina Marie has put in print, this work is worthy of reading, re-reading and saving.

I am in the process of re-reading and reading all of her works on her web site and story site. I only hope I can finish/save stories I want to revisit before it goes silent.

If there is any justice, all of her works will be transferred to a site we can all enjoy. SOL.

Is that subtle enough Laz?

Seriously though, If it has Gina Marie Wylie as an author, read it.

Plot: N/A | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: N/A

Review by richardshagrin   [other reviews by richardshagrin]

Reviewed:


I recommend reading this story. The author is one of our best and you could do worse than read all of her stories. It's a fairly complex plot and I don't do well reciting all of the details, but I was satisfied with it and its resolution. It might be the introduction to a longer story, we learn a lot about the hero and some about the heroine, and not much gets fully resolved. But I voted it very good and I will be surprised if you don't agree.

The plot is complex for a short story and leaves opportunity for more. I gave it a nine, which is an A plus. The technical was without flaw as far as I could tell, but I am reluctant to give tens unless the story blows me away. The appeal was an eight, which is an A. Like many stories I would like it more if it were longer.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
 

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