A surprising, yet tender relationship forms between a loner and a young girl in the Canadian wilderness.
Size: 21 KB (4,157 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Historical, First, Pregnancy
Review by The Black Knight [other reviews by The Black Knight]
Reviewed:
As is often the case with new writers' early works, the technical quality of this story was sorely lacking. Most of the problem is the fact that it is apparently unedited. However, if one can look past the technical deficiencies, it's actually a pretty good story.
The characters were interesting enough, although somewhat cliche and one dimensional. If the story had been somewhat longer, maybe both characters could have developed a little more; as it was, only the main character was ever developed at all.
All that aside, I think that this writer is capable of a lot more once the growing pains of developing as an author is over. In between now and then I'd suggest this story only to those willing to overlook the flaws, and are interested in a simple little romance with a hint of violence. Those looking for pure stroke, those looking for flawless writing, and those looking for something more complex should look elsewhere.
