Not With a Bang by D.Dar Niron

Author's Description:
A true story of tragedy, loss, hope and suffering. Ch 1 is a diatribe. Nothing more, nothing less. Depending what side of the fence you're on you are justified in considering me delusional. Ch 2 is the story of my life, the decisions I have made and the focus the Valdez case provided to allow me to make a final decision.
Size: 87 KB (15,800 words)
Genre: True Story
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: True Story, Historical, Horror

Review by The Black Knight   [other reviews by The Black Knight]

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Well, I tried to like this story. Unfortunately, I was unable to actually find a story. What this was, instead, was a poorly written and misinformed diatribe written against a recent court decision. Technically, it wasn't quite as bad as the score would indicate, but the fact that it isn't actually a story causes it to lose an extra point.

I expect that those who are as seriously delusional as the writer will possibly enjoy this particular piece, if they can overlook the poor editing.

Otherwise, I suggest people not waste their time on it.