Imagine, if you will, another universe, one in which all girls and women secretly long to be submissive slaves, spanked into submission. It is a world where pregnancy is totally controlled and not an issue of concern and STDs do not exist but in which our conventional morality is still the norm. However, that is changing. A new program has been introduced into the schools, NUDEP.
Size: 526 KB (101,239 words)
Genre: BDSM
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Ma/ft, ft/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, NonConsensual, Reluctant, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, Spanking, Humiliation, Sadistic, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Sex Toys
Review by fuzzywuzzy [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]
Reviewed:
This is a story from an alternate Universe; a Universe where the males are Dominant Masters and the women are subservient slaves. The concept has been finely tuned and researched by the Author who shows a great amount of maturity in the tale.
To set the scene let me quote directly from the words of one of the young teachers who is chosen by the Headmaster of the School where the action takes center stage,
" It is,it seems, for men to command and women to obey, for men to dominate and women to submit, for men to claim and women to yield.
"It is, it seems, the way of primitive nature.
"Its test is enactment, its proof is joy, its evidence is love.
"We cannot afford to lose this part of ourselves any more.
"We must accept and embrace it."
Paul is our hero, a young pre-emergent Dominant who joins a trial Dom/sub program at his school where he assumes the responsibility of protecting Jennifer who must be nude at all times and be subjected to the caresses of the entire School population. Paul's job increases exponentially as Jen starts to rely on him to control her life. Paul and Jen also come to realize that her father was her mother's Master, and comes to desire her boyfriend Paul to be her Master too. He agrees to this as long as she submits to him wholly and without reservation. Which she does.
Betty desires the same thing from a man and realizes that she also needs Paul as her Master.
He accepts the responsibility for Betty as well, and through the use of punishment and rewards gains the undying love of his slaves.
This Universe allows for the experimentation in BDSM, as well as the more simple D/S of this story.
One or two items not tested is the possibility of incestuous relations between father and daughter, and son and mother, or brother and sister when the Master donates the services of hi slaves to other Masters; after all they are chattels and have no say in the giving of the slaves bodies. Also there is no mention of birth control; do the slaves become pregnant without regard to family?
I became quite confused a couple of times with he names being mixed up, or so it seems, but apart from these I thoroughly enjoyed the story, but surely the rest of a slaves body should feel the whip as well as her bottom.
Enjoy, But be careful how you treat your fems, it may backfire on you in this Universe.
