Castaways on a tropical island find adventure and love.
Size: 88 KB (16,610 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, First
Review by The Black Knight [other reviews by The Black Knight]
Reviewed:
This is a more than worthy addition to an accomplished writer's portfolio. It isn't without flaws, and a little editing would remove the most obvious ones, but the technical miscues were infrequent enough to not overly distract from the story.
As to the story, the suspension of disbelief is strained in a few places even before the sex starts, but if the reader can disconnect from reality enough to relax and enjoy the story, it's quite entertaining. As a reworking of a common premise, it's not high on originality, but it's well done.
As it isn't intended as a stroke piece, its stroke value isn't terribly high, but even those looking for stroke shouldn't be too disappointed with this story. Basically, I'd recommend it to anyone who isn't turned off by the coded content.
