A Girl in the Night by Jake Rivers

Author's Description:
Tom is down on women after his wife dumps him for a handsome guacho from Argentina. Can he be tempted by the girl sitting at Willy's Tavern looking so sad and lonely. She was just... a girl in the night.
Size: 61 KB (12,277 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Romantic

Review by BikeWriter   [other reviews by BikeWriter]

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Building a rapport between one's characters and the readers is the skill I admire most in a good writer, and Jake Rivers is one of our best here at Storiesonline.

The emotions, thoughts, and memories of his main character are so familiar to me as a veteran, a divorcee, and a father. The stroke value? No, there were no narratives about all night sex all over Texas, but I have been in the same state as our hero, both literally and figuratively, and my mind filled in the blanks.

I'll put it into three words: Damned good read!