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Author's Description:
This is the story of a girl named Madison, who is rich, pretty and popular--in short, for a seventeen-year-old girl, she had it all. Then she discovered why she didn't.
Size: 261 KB (47,561 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: ft/ft, Teenagers, First, Caution

Review by peregrinf   [other reviews by peregrinf]

Reviewed:


Okay, this was not what I expected. I don't want to say too much, but the characters are sympathetic and believable. The plot hangs on an unexpected quirk of nature, and hangs together. It's good, very readable, and technically I saw no flaws.

The dialogue is realistic (one of my current pet peeves is stilted dialogue).

There's no graphic sex, only a brief lesbian encounter that slides past with barely a ripple, except for a lingering aftermath in relationships.

The only disappointment for me was that I didn't want it to end where it did. I wanted more. But I liked what I got.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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