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This, my second story, is a slow romantic tale about two young teens: a fourteen-year-old American boy in Tehran, Iran and a thirteen-year-old Iranian girl thrust together by circumstances of culture, religious fundamentalism and injustice due to a confrontation with Iran's morality police that changes their lives forever. It is definitely not a stroke story. There is some violence in this story: please read the preface! A COMPLETE RE-EDIT AND REPOST ON 4-4-10
Size: 203 KB (38,366 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Teenagers, Romantic, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Squirting, Slow

Review by The Black Knight   [other reviews by The Black Knight]

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Technically, this story had plenty of room for improvement. It was edited reasonably well, and while it has (since this review was first written) been re-edited, a number of things slipped through, most noticeably some odd (typographical) characters and some confused tense usage. A number of earlier issues have, however, been caught and fixed.

Now that that is out of the way, I must say that I really liked this story. Truly interesting characters, a rich setting, and a creative plot added up to make this a really good story. The way the story was told allowed a perfect way to end this book and still leave a clear opening for a sequel.

Anyone who likes coming-of-age stories, slow developing romances, and a touch of foreign culture I would definitely recommend this story to. Those looking for stroke would be best served looking elsewhere, as would those who are disturbed by excessive non-sexual violence and religion.

It seems possible that the sequel to this story may, in fact, benefit from a resumption, and I look forward to its (possible) completion envelope.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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