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Geeze... Ever read a story that you wished had a few hundred more chapters and/or a couple dozen sequels??? This is one of those! In other words, I was REALLY sorry to see this story end!
Plot: The plot of this story was stellar! The story line had enough twists to make you rushing to the next chapter to find out what would happen next, the sex scenes were tasteful & erotic and there were numerous "feel good" and "Oh, no please don't let that happen!"-s to have made this one of the most intriguing stories I have read in a long time.
Technical: As usual for one of Tallorder64's stories there is a great need for an editor. Incorrect word usage, nonsensical phrases and general grammatical errors were the biggest down side of this story.
Appeal: In spite of the technical issues, I'd REALLY recommend this story to anyone who likes "thrillers", "romances" or people who like to lose sleep because "I just have to read one more chapter to see what happens next!".