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Author's Description:
Scarred emotionally he nonetheless has a goal in life. Then he's thrown by a number of surprising reactions and finds himself wading deeper and deeper into the mire. Can she save him from himself? Will his 'good' side win out in the end? Where are the limits of society? When is it okay for good people to fight fire with fire in the battle against evil?
Size: 535 KB (100,221 words)
Genre: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, ft/ft, Teenagers, Romantic, NonConsensual, Incest, Brother, Sister, First, Oral Sex

Review by Bobster   [other reviews by Bobster]

Reviewed:


Great story with a well thought out plot. Just enough sex to keep things interesting. If you are looking for stroke material move on, but if you want to read an engaging story about retribution and justice, then read on!

Few technical errors, none of which detracted from the story. There is a sequel to this which I have not yet read but I plan to!

The author pushed several of my buttons in a good way, I am a fan of the Sackett's a western family created by Louis L'Amour, matter of fact I always thought those stories would be great if they had a little more on camera sex! No this story is not a western, but the main character is influenced by reading westerns in terms of his sense of right and wrong.

All in all a great read!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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