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Author's Description:
A thunderstorm forces Eric Sears to cancel his Saturday golf game. What he finds at home forces him to re-evaluate his life.
Size: 66 KB (12,637 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Cheating

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


What do a golf game, thunderstorms, and Mary have in common? It seems Eric Sears, an attorney, found out.

After getting his regular round of golf rained out on Saturday, he heads home. Meanwhile, Mary Sears and Jeffrey Elliot were playing around, and Eric discovered them; it was not golf if you know what I mean. The last player in this opera is Renee Elliott, who is eight months pregnant and plays a significant role.Mary and Jeffrey, the cheaters, are soon tossed away. Eric and Renee discover that there is life after divorce.

The author Jay Cantrell has created another work of art in which people interact in their usual cheating ways. They claw their way to normalcy after being dragged down into the pits of hell and slowly, piece by piece.

Intersecting Circles does a great way to spend an evening relaxing and reading an excellent story.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9

Review by funkso   [other reviews by funkso]

Reviewed:


Eric is a guy who doesn't really like the rainy days, they've never worked out well for him. When his golf day is interrupted by rain he has no idea how bad the day is going to get though.

So, it's a cheating wife tale, but it is pretty optimistic. I enjoyed it quite a bit and liked the approaches taken through the story as Eric deals with his wife's infidelity and settling into his new life.

No sex really, but it's a nice story, and when you get stuck in a rut of reading cheating wives tales and feeling gloomy, this one can help break you out.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7
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