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Author's Description:
James is a bitter tired artist, who suddenly finds that he has been returned to a time before everthing went to hell. The only problem, is that some things have changed. (No Explicit Sex.)
Size: 416 KB (76,388 words)
Genre: Time Travel
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: ft/ft, TransGender, Time Travel, DoOver, School

Review by richardshagrin   [other reviews by richardshagrin]

Reviewed:


I voted this very good. It's not your typical do-over, even with the added attraction of the guy going back as a 16 year old girl. Unless a little masturbation counts, there is almost no sex. There is character development certainly comparing the former life as a man to what we see of the heroine as a girl. No sex, no drugs (except the roofie she manages to dodge), but a fair amount of rock and roll. The protagonist plays guitar and sings, in a couple of college bands. It ends with her losing her college roommate and lesbian lover to a guy, but she decides she'd rather be a girl than go back to being the loser guy she was. Its not the normal SOL story but try it, I think you will like it. I saw no technical issues, the plot has plenty of twists and turns, and again, I thought it was very good.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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