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Author's Description:
A 50+ bartender falls in love with a 20+ barmaid. A slow story.
Size: 117 KB (23,112 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Interracial, Black Female, White Male, Oriental Female, Oral Sex, Petting, Slow

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Reviewed:


This is a nice little story about a budding relationship that was built over a period of time. No instant falling in lust, no instant falling in bed with the attendant minute details.

Technically it was good only a couple of misspellings there but I could be mistaken, the same for grammar. Complete sentences and coherent, what a concept !

For a lite afternoon scan this is a good one.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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