Author's Description:
this is a story about a young man that went from nerd to emperor. it's just some thing that might happen if your not looking for it. I hope that you enjoy it, but if not well that's always chess.
Size: 155 KB (31,685 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Fiction

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed:


I probably will be castigated by Lazeez for this Review, but I feel that although the storyline is excellent this is written by someone with very little exposure to the English Language which could very well be the Author's second language. As far as Science Fiction goes it is reasonably well written, but fails the acid test of readability; and unfortunately his postscript seems to tell the Reader if he doesn't like it, read something else.

I see that a vote in all categories is 1/ 1/ 1/ and 1/, and I endorse that vote completely!

We have a damned fine Editorial Department, purely free of charge, that Authors can obtain assistance from, but as is his right fintinman refuses to ask for help; he also denies the reader the opportuhity to give him any feedback. I wonder why.

Plot: 1 | Technical Quality: 1 | Appeal to Reviewer: 1
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