Reviewed:
This is an interesting and enjoyable story but ends up leaving the reader rather puzzled. Chapter 3 ends with the sentences, "There you go! All corrected for spelling, continuity, flow, and redundancy. Ready to copy and paste." It would be reasonable to assume that this is an editor's comment. It's OK. Mrs. Kashuahara just forgot to delete it.
Chapter 4 is the real puzzle. It does follow the story but every character has a different name! Have we shifted to a parallel universe? Was the author feeling a little capricious? We will probably never know, as Mrs. Kashuahara does not permit us to contact her.
These comments should not discourage the reader from sitting comfortably, with a glass of something interesting to sip while enjoying a little bit of generally well written prose. The plot is simple but very credible. The characters are well drawn and the pace is just right.
I am going to submit this review and look for another Kashuahara story to read.