What if the people started to die? What would you do?
Size: 146 KB (28,864 words)
Genre: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Consensual, NonConsensual, Rape, Slavery, Science Fiction, Post Apocalypse, DomSub, MaleDom, Torture, Snuff, Violent
Review by Threesheets [other reviews by Threesheets]
Reviewed:
Kill or Be Killed. Not a bad start. Standard terrorist attack goes hay wire. Survival, yes. Bad guys, yes. Military, yes. Only the military is a kinder and gentler type who actually want to accomplish something other than total control. There are a lot of nuts out there.
The plot is well laid out, although it does move quite a bit faster than I would personally like. Not a lot of sex but I'm not interested in that since it contributes absolutely nothing to the story line.
My biggest complaint is the miss use of words and to me it's just plain lazy.
I don't know how many times QUITE was used when QUIET was called for. BUILD for BUILDING and a few other things like that.
I have noticed the same problem in other submissions by Acolodude.
FIRE YOUR PROOF READER. He/she doesn't have a clue.
Over all, a good read. Not great but good.
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