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Author's Description:
It's not your typical 'pick up' at the bar as a shy wallflower finds out that just because he isn't her type, doesn't mean he isn't perfect for her
Size: 203 KB (38,494 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Oral Sex, Petting, Slow

Review by Paw Writer   [other reviews by Paw Writer]

Reviewed:


This story is from before I joined SOL, but I found it and liked it enough to give it a vote of Very Good. However, at the time I wasn't reviewing. It came up as a Random Story and I read it again and STILL like it just as well. This time I will review it.

This is a good romance, with enough drama to make things interesting. The relationship is going great, even a bit too fast, until the past rears its head. It also is a good story of the growth of the heroine.

The main characters are believable, with their faults and all. The sex is well done and detailed.

The editing is fairly good, with not enough errors to make problems understanding the story.

I might give this story a 10, but there are a couple questions never resolved. A sequel was promised but never delivered. A problem which occurs too often.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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