Reviewed:
The plot is a combination of Western, time travel, historical fiction, harem, and ancestral. The plot is a bit slow for a Western and focuses pretty heavily on the ancestry of the MC, but is still entertaining.
The spelling and grammar could use some work as there are quite a few misspelled or missing words that leave some sentences feeling a bit off. It also contains my biggest pet peeve of lose spelled as loose.
Overall it’s a solid story that could use some editing and maybe a little more western-style action.
Reviewed:
Wow! Fantastic story, with a little bit of everything in it! Had me laughing out loud one minute, and wiping tears away the next. (Choked up kind mostly).
The tie ins with some of my favorite songs helped a lot. I will never hear Ring of Fire or El Paso the same again!
I stayed up way too late to finish reading this, and don't regret a second of it!
The story is a Time Travel story, but not your typical take on it. Time Travel plays a role, but it is very secondary to the story! Even if you don't like Time Travel stories please don't pass this one by. I promise you will love it!
Follow Ty as he goes back into El Paso of 1877 and has a chance to right wrongs, save "fallen" women, and love enough for all. It is a trip you will be grateful you took!