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Prisoner accepts a wager from one of the guards that he can't seduce the prisoner's wife. What the prisoner doesn't know is that his wife is lonely.
Size: 17 KB (3,403 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Stroke Story
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Cheating

Review by Joesephus   [other reviews by Joesephus]

Reviewed:


This is a variation on the Cuckold husband concept. I think the writing flowed and the sex scenes are better than the ones I write. My real complaint is that this is one plot that just doesn't work for me.

My problem is that I've done some volunteer work in a maximum security prison and also in a minimum security prison. The husband would own the guard! In fact this is one of the things that guards are warned about because any contact with a prisoner's family is ground for dismissal and possibly prosecution.

The reason is simple, it's too easy to get a guard corrupted if they start meeting family members.

So, if you can suspend belief... should be easy to do, and if you like seeing a husband humiliated (I have to confess I don't enjoy that but I'll always read any prison story) you'll enjoy this story.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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