This is a tale of how it happens once again to a man who would have given anything to just quit. And take his senior years a little quieter, but life doesn't want that it wants him to be the man who started it all, or did he.
Size: 13 KB (2,727 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Fiction, Incest, Mother, Son, Brother, Sister, Father, Daughter, Group Sex, Harem
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )
In "He's at it Again", we have the story of how a now 50yr old man ended up with his wife, her sisters, and a good portion of his daughter-in-laws to breed.
The sex in this story is told in such a way as to make a "Reader's Digest Condensed Story" look like "War and Peace". Sex with each partner is effectively a sentence. There is no stroke value to this story. The Mm and mm codes are a joke, as you simply hear about one of his sons doing his other sons (and that includes one of the fathers... it's too complicated to bother with) and the like. There's a lot of cuckold action unfolding, but again, not told in a titilating detail.
The plot itself is very shaky. The storyteller basically gives the miniscule highlights of his breeding program with his family members. But there isn't enough story to be called a story. Strangers in a bar will give you more detail and a better plot when telling "pussy tales". There is also zero dialogue in the whole story. It's all recollection, with nary a quotation mark seen.
Technically, this story is really poor. Homonyms galore are abused. "Witch" instead of "which" was my particular favorite. Poor punctuation and grammar were also thrown about liberally.
In my opinion, the author needs to decide to work with an editor, and stop trying to make a whole chapter fit into a single paragraph/sentence. There was an idea here, that has been done before, but the author could have thrown their own twist on it. Instead, the story comes across more as bragging one-liners about what an ego-less stud the storyteller is.
I strongly recommend that readers stay away from this. It offers neither stroke nor storytelling value.
