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Author's Description:
A family vacation ends when a strange storm in the Bermuda triangle claims 13 year old Tom as its victim. Tom is transported back to the beginning of time were he meets a girl older then he thought was possible.
Size: 37 KB (7,613 words)
Genre: Time Travel
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/Fa, Consensual, Science Fiction, Time Travel, First

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed:


Over the years there has been an enourmous amount of speculation about the Bermuda Triangle, and, in fact, it is a load of hogwash! But that doesn't stop Timm from having fun about a young boy of thirteen who is whipped back through time to a mysterious island inhabited by a seemingly young girl. She, Eva by name, is from the recent future about 2090, and Tom Adams quickly falls in love with the little gamin, and all is at peace with this world and time.

Speculate all you must after reading the tale, for that is the way of people with fertile minds!

This is not a stroke story but one of the gadzillion ways that humanity could have started!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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