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After a visit with Santa in the men's room of the local shopping mall, ninth grader Patrick Sterling wakes up on Christmas morning to find himself three years older. Is it too late to fix the mess that he appears to have made out of high school? And is he even capable of doing it, having missed out on the lessons he would have learned in the intervening years? In most time travel stories the hero travels backward; not this one.
Size: 692 KB (130,597 words)
Genre: Time Travel
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Teenagers, Consensual, Time Travel
After a visit with Santa in the men's room of the local shopping mall, ninth grader Patrick Sterling wakes up on Christmas morning to find himself three years older. Is it too late to fix the mess that he appears to have made out of high school? And is he even capable of doing it, having missed out on the lessons he would have learned in the intervening years? In most time travel stories the hero travels backward; not this one.
Size: 692 KB (130,597 words)
Genre: Time Travel
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Teenagers, Consensual, Time Travel
Review by fuzzywuzzy [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]
Reviewed:
Patrick is an asshole! His entire life is a real screw up, and even his family somehow wishes he was someone else!
Then one Christmas eve he encounters Santa Claus in, of all places, a men's washroom. The next thing he is certain of is that it is three years later, and he has no idea how it happened.
So, now we have a stupid jock given the chance of a lifetime to re-write his own future, and make a success of his life; and get the girl of his dreams too!
Sometimes we forget the agonies that haunt the Author's mind when he plans a story, but when it finally reaches the 'printed' page and is excellent in form, action, and plot, he can be proud of the result!
Congratulations, well done.
Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
