Bob Long helps a woman that had hit a deer in a snow storm. He finds that she needs help with more than her car.
Size: 308 KB (60,582 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Slow
Review by Safe_Bet [other reviews by Safe_Bet]
Reviewed:
Hmmm... did you ever really like a story, but the lack of proper editing got in the way? well, this is one of those.
Plot: The plot is great. Not a whole bunch of twists and turns, but it had enough to be interesting. The net result was an excellent romance story. You knew from the beginning where it was going to end up and the "getting there" was sweet.
Technical: 'Tallorder64' needs an editor. Misspellings ("Campaign" is not a drink, sorry!), grammatical errors and general "huh?"s got in the way of the story.
Appeal: I really enjoyed the story. It was a nice and had a sweet, expected ending. In spite of the "oopses" I would recommend this story to anyone who likes romance stories.
Review by Threesheets [other reviews by Threesheets]
Reviewed:
Just a little slow to start but once going it moved right along. While the plot was fairly predictable, I was happy to see no skeletons in either of the closets. Yes he has the power and uses it. Personally I thought he uses it too much. Read the story and you'll see what I am talking about.
The biggest problem was the misprints, double words and things that a half way decent beta/proof reader could rectify.
It's a nice story, with the requisite globe trotting. I wonder if a story similar to this could be done with a couple where one wasn't mega rich?
FD rating 1 hankie
