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Author's Description:
This is the story of a man hopelessly in love with young teenage women.
Size: 33 KB (6,169 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Petting, Foot Fetish

Review by TheMoose63   [other reviews by TheMoose63]

Reviewed:


Before you read this understand that it just the beginning of the story and no more. The author introduces the reader to the main character and describes what he does and what he likes and perhaps even who he is but he leaves the entire story line up for grabs. The author professes to be a poor writer but is anything but that, this is an excellent beginning to a tale of...what? We don't know that yet but believe me I'm going to keep reading as he puts up more and more chapters and I recommend that you do too.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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