Arrian deals with a magical sword, his father's death. Helping his mother and sister accept this tragic event. All the meanwhile attending high school, in a new city. Where things can go wrong in an instant.
Size: 690 KB (129,359 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, mt/Fa, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Rape, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Extra Sensory Perception, Incest, Mother, Son, Harem, First, Anal Sex, Pregnancy, Size, Violent
Review by therev [other reviews by therev]
Reviewed:
I came across this by accident and was not sure what to expect. I enjoyed the plot and was never sure which way it was going to go. The story of a young man who finds that he has remarkable powers and uses them to help others and defeat the bad guys.
This story was supposed to have been "edited / proofed"?? That is the impression I gained in the "thank yous". However, if it was, then what happened to the cleaned up version? This was full of grammar, typo and spelling errors. Additionally, words were missing, some were repeated words, letters missing from words or extraneous letters left in the narrative.
These errors detracted horrendously from a smooth, enjoyable, exciting reading of the story. Please do better with your "proof readers" and "editors".
