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Author's Description:
Having read Alias X's story "Psst! I Don't Love My Sister", I just had to write a response. This is the continued story of his total loser, and how the best laid plans of a loser can fail spectacularly. Of course, we shouldn't be surprised, right? After all he IS a total loser. You must read his story before reading this story.
Size: 28 KB (5,684 words)
Genre: Horror
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Humor, Brother, Sister, Pregnancy

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed:


You have to be a born loser to really understand this story of a mean, ugly, cheap son-of-a-bitch who even gets fucking his sister wrong. And his life as an opinion pollster wannabe is the pits. He actually decides that he is going to tell the new show producers what is wrong with their scripts, and sad to say, he's right.

So, he gets his sister pregnant, and she wants another one as soon as they can. All his totally stupid loser ideas end him up a gadzillionaire, and however bad his comments are he makes a million telling them how wrong they are.

So blame it all on Bob and Peaches, they're the ones who wrote it. All I had to do was read it. They're going to let me out of the Home next week.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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