What would you do if you discovered a way to KNOW the thought and emotions of those around you. Then you discover that you can manipulate and control these to some extent. This is what one yound man did when it happend to him. enjoy
Size: 805 KB (159,305 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, ft/ft, Consensual, Mind Control, Lesbian, Heterosexual, Fiction, Incest, Sister, Oral Sex, Anal Sex
Review by fuzzywuzzy [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]
Reviewed:
I keep on telling people who read my Reviews, that I'm a sucker for a really good sexy love story; and this one is a real humdinger!
Mike is somewhat nerdy, but in a really nice way. He meets up with the love of his life, Diane, and as we see others who fall under his philosophy of love.
In the meantime his research leads to perfect some of his mental studies into how he can influence others, and we are treated to an enjoyable romp through his young life.
It may disappoint some readers when he reaches maturity only to find out that his chronicler dismisses his family and lovers somewhat cavalierly, in my opinion.
But still it is a romping good tale and I recommend it to you without reservation.
Oh, and some terrific sex scenes, too.
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed:
In "The Force", we have the story of a 16yr old boy that starts to practice mind control abilities after watching Star Wars a whole lot. Eventually, he works up the courage to use it on his sister's best friend, and his sister. Follow along as he slowly seduces them both, and others.
The sex in the story takes the long road, in that each encounter seems to build towards the next. It isn't a case of quickies, but the boy taking his time to make the girls really enjoy things. And the sex scenes are hot for the most part. While there is some mind control aspect to the story, it is not the overt kind that you usually see. The boy is subtle in his seductions. One thing of note is the author totally botched where the hymen was located, which is a major pet peeve of mine. The vaginal deflowering scenes were ruined for me because of that, and that hurt the stroke score and overall appeal.
The plot itself is ok. There is nothing that stands out as a major crisis event, and there is very little conflict for the characters to overcome. Since this story is more about stroke than story, the plot was sufficient to move us from one scene to another, but it won't keep you enthralled. The ending felt kind of rushed. The author indicated there would be a follow-up story, but it never appeared on this site.
Technically, there were some errors. Most notable was there were several occasions where two people spoke in the same paragraph. Also, having an IUD inserted would destroy the hymen, as a speculum is used, and they have to dilate the cervix to insert it. Yet the girl had her hymen later for her first vaginal intercourse.
I really wanted to enjoy this story, but it just failed to get me really going. The various errors threw me out of my immersion, often at times where I was really getting into a scene.
If you like a more gentle kind of mind control story, and technical errors won't bother you, you will probably enjoy this story quite a bit. Normally I do enjoy that gentle mind control, but the errors caught up with me.
