Fast paced stroke story about a teen boy who gets initiated into the world of bareback sex by an older woman and her horny teen daughter.
Size: 11 KB (2,136 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, BiSexual, Incest, Mother, Daughter, Pregnancy, Cream Pie
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed:
In "Oh Fuck, Mrs Huving!", we have the story of a 15yr old boy that helps a horny older woman and her daughter enjoy some nasty sex.
The sex in this story comes at you hard and fast, but it is tempered by the fact that the author is enamored of changing the names of the various acts/body parts. If that type of thing makes you hot, you may hurt yourself getting off. If it just annoys you, like it does this reviewer, you will have any excitement squashed. The participants do a lot of heavy mental imagery, which if the wording was more consistent, would have been damn hot.
The plot itself is pretty straight stroke. Boy fucks older woman, older woman's daughter sees and wants in on the action, boy fucks girl.
Technically, the story was of average quality.
Overall, the author's use of various terms for the same thing in such a short piece starts to detract from the stroke value, which is the story's only appeal. For semen/sperm alone, I saw: "hot gooey ball juice", "creamy semen", "cock juice", "nut cream", "ball goo", "pop your nutt", "load of tadpoles", "gooey ball batter", "big geyser of scalding semen", "creamy baby batter", and "spunk". That's serious overkill. While some readers file that hot, many are turned off by it. The eyes and mind start to count and think about the various names being used, and stop concentrating on the story itself.
This story could have been pretty darned hot, if a little out there, but it wasn't.
If you like a lot of different words describing the same thing, this story will set your shorts/panties on fire. If you don't, stay away.
