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Author's Description:
The second story in the Willow Chronicles, in which Erica takes her friend Tara to the clearing to meet a very special friend.
Size: 22 KB (4,447 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: ft/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Magic, Fiction, BDSM, First, Anal Sex, Size, Violent

Review by Daniellekitten   [other reviews by Daniellekitten]

Reviewed:


This was a different kind of story that dealt with the powers of magic combining two of the elements, earth and fire. I love magic and this story seemed to be full of it.

It was written well with only a few spots that I could see that seemed kind of rough. And while I may not agree with Frozen North about what the female orgasm feels like, he did a very nice job describing the physical aspect.

It was interesting and makes me wonder what is coming next.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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