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Author's Description:
I wasn't my baby's father and I had to make a choice.
Size: 56 KB (11,515 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Tear Jerker, Cheating

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


thecelt created an interesting dilemma for Jonathan Hendricks, a new parent to Penny Ann Hendricks. The tale has two completely different endings. Both show Jonathan dealing with the problem in different ways.

Page Williams, the mother, has created a poor situation for Jonathon. Does he stay or leave? Page did an excellent job of selling her pregnancy to her husband of six years. But there is the question of timing (i.e., a woman's natural body functions).

This story made me think an awful lot about life and marriage. The story rated at a 6.32 overall; it has some good points and one ending I didn't like. You need to read the story and make your own decisions on how it affects you.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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