This is an account of a Dad, Mom and twin young teenage cheerleaders girls and their friends. There is tasteful sexual content and descriptions, but the emphasis is on story development and the lives of 2 girls and their family. If you like good stories with erotic content but graphic stroke sex is not the primary reason for reading, try this one.
Size: 987 KB (193,203 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Mult, Consensual, Romantic, Reluctant, Rape, Drunk/Drugged, Heterosexual, Fiction, Science Fiction, Time Travel, Humor, Tear Jerker, Extra Sensory Perception, Mother, Brother, Sister, Father, Daughter, Gang Bang, Group Sex, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Slow, Violent
Review by Clee_Hill [other reviews by Clee_Hill]
Reviewed:
One of my first loves at SOL, My Girls is the story of Patrick and his family as they discover more and more of the mystery of who they are.
It begins with Patrick watching a video of his daughter being gang raped. Yeah. But his reaction to his response is one of guilty. That was what kept me reading. Hopefully it will keep you engaged too, because after that the ride gets wild as more mysteries are discovered and revealed.
Suffice it to say, Patrick and his family are not who they seem, and not who they think they are.
Stroke-wise, there is plenty to keep you going, without it getting in the way of the telling of the story, and there is enough variation to keep it reading from the 'cut-and-paste' passages you might discover here on SOL.
Technically, it's well written, with very few typos, and nothing that intrudes the reading experience.
If you get into this story, there are two sequels that really develop the story.
Review by Bobster [other reviews by Bobster]
Reviewed:
I am bouncing in my chair as I write this since what I really want to be doing is reading Book 2!
If you can believe me, I read about half of My Girls awhile back, and just could not connect for some reason. I went back again and finished it and I am so glad I did!
It's an incredibly complicated tale, full of twists and turns and surprises. Oh, and lots of great sex! But the story is what captivated me. I almost can't say anything specific without inadvertantly writing a spoiler. Just take my word for it, it's a great story, well written, and well thought out!
If like me, you get to a part when reading where you feel like you are getting to much input at once, just hang in there! It will make sense! And you will be glad you finished it!!!!
Review by fuzzywuzzy [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]
Reviewed:
This story starts out quite simply, but slowly and surely the further into the chapters one goes the more complicated it gets, Patrick and Victoria are husband and wife, and both have a secret past and current employment which seems to be rather cloak and daggerish. They have not so identical twin daughters, Amy and Cindi, who are, of course, talented and beautiful. Patrick seems to be rather slow to act at first, but like the ol' daddy bear he protects his family to the death! Slowly but surely he realises that Victoria encourages him to make love to his daughters, and in fact this incestuous lovemaking forces the girls to become complete in their physical and mental powers. Sadly one of the twins is murdered, and the chase is on to find the ringleader of the gang that is the antithesis of the 'good guys' lead by Patrick. The sex is hot and heavy, and the action exciting and bloody!
Read this as the prequel to "My Girls 11" where all is explained, and just as well written.
It is sometimes very difficult for an Author to keep track of each and every sub plot and believe me I've found some doozies out there. But not with unknown1000u2.
I do recommend reading #1 before #2.
Enjoy!
