Debbie and Robby have secretly played in the mysterious abandoned mansion next door for most of their lives. Now, as they keep their own flowering sexuality secret, the house begins to give up some of its secrets. Then their world is turned upside down when a stranger arrives, exposing even more secrets about their mother, himself, and even them.
Size: 553 KB (104,042 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Incest, Brother, Sister, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Pregnancy
Review by fuzzywuzzy [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]
Reviewed:
Well, Wow, Hooraw, over a year on the web, and 26 votes!
What more do you guys want? A rollicking story of a haunted house, a loving family of a widowed mother and her son and daughter, and a strange man entering the picture, and "wham-bam-thank-you-maam" both women are pregnant, deliciously so, and the son, and mom's lover are the fathers!
Suffice to say, that this tale of love and incest is a part of B-O-B's entertaining stories, and I for one have so far not found one I didn't like.
So, enjoy...I did!
The only thing missing is a little bit of snuff, so what!
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed:
In "A Haunting Love", BOB has created an interesting little love story involving a brother and a sister, and a brother and a sister.
The sexual build-up in this story is quite nice. The one set of siblings takes quite a while to reach actual intercourse. The other set jumps right into expressing their love.
The plot itself was different. This isn't a ghost story and there isn't an attempt to scare the reader. The characters fit well together, and their behavior in their weird situation makes sense.
Technically, the story got off to a fairly sloppy start. The early part of the first chapter was full of awkward sentences, with commas being in bad places. Once he got through the history of the mansion, the quality improved. Nothing further in the story was enough to ruin the immersion, but there are some minor errors present throughout.
If you haven't read any of BOB's other works, this story is a lot of fun. If you have, you will quickly pick up where he is going, and how it is going to turn out. That may diminish some of your enjoyment. Unfortunately, since BOB is so true to his audience and his 'fetishes' of incest and pregnancy, I had a sense of "I know where this going, hurry and rush through it" feeling. That did affect my enjoyment of the overall story.
Make no mistake, this is a very good story. It wasn't BOB's best, but it was certainly worth the read. Maybe this reviewer just needs to check into the Betty Ford Clinic for BOB story addiction, so I don't find them too easy to predict.
Review by Stormy Weather [other reviews by Stormy Weather]
Reviewed:
Bob has out done himself in this story centered around a haunted mansion belonging to the Nettleton family. And while the house brings everyone in the story together, in more ways than one, the story is really about love.
Debbie and her brother Robby are delightful teenagers and are funny in their discovery of each other and sex. There are laugh out loud moments between these two and some grab the handkerchief moments, too.
Their mother Ramona has a past that no one knows about but she and her brother whom she hasn't heard from in years. When this past comes to light in a way that is all Beating Off Bob, the lives of Debbie and Robby are changed forever.
Bob is a wonderful story teller and had me from the first chapter and I give this story a gold star.
