Claire's life is on an even keel. She's got a good job and two great children. There's no man in her life... but then she doesn't think she needs one. Everything is going along just fine... until she agrees to chaperone the football team on a trip out of town. She learns things about her children and herself, that will change everything.
Size: 215 KB (40,427 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Reluctant, Heterosexual, Incest, Brother, Sister, Masturbation, Petting, Voyeurism, Slow
Review by pairadice [other reviews by pairadice]
Reviewed:
This is one of BOB's better stories plot-wise. There's some unexpected twists and great dramatic tension. This should have a rating of about 15.
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed:
With "Chaperone Blues", BOB scribes another fun tale that involves incest, love, and football.
I liked this story. Not as much as I have liked some of BOB's other works. I'd consider this an average work of his. Average for BOB is still better than the majority of incest stories you will find, though.
The sex is hot, intense, and entertaining. It takes a little while to get to, but then it steams up your monitor nicely. BOB is always good for stroke material.
He's also good for plot. The plot moves along nicely. The Epilogue was a nice touch. The story wouldn't have been damaged without it, if there was a little more of the brother/sister coming back together, and the two adults doing the same. I might have liked to see that more than the Epilogue itself, but no harm was done to the story.
Technically, some of the early chapters had a few errors in them, but nothing too jarring to ruin the immersion into the story. The later chapters were all very well done.
If I had to rate the "Appeal to Reviewer" based on BOB's other stories, I would score lower. But that wouldn't be fair to the story, which by itself is very good. It's just that BOB has done so many stories that are very good, that it dilutes the appeal of this somewhat. By itself, it earns the 10 I gave it. There are other stories of his that I would recommend more highly than this one, though.
